Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Halloween Costumes

My favorite Halloween costume was a princess costume I wore in my Freshman year of highschool. A friend of mine gave me a princess crown on my birthday and I wore that along with a pink dress my mom wore in a wedding. That night a bunch of my good friends and I went trick or treating. The other costumes that night included, a pimp, a girl, a boy, and a pumpkin. The princess costume was my favorite because it was the most memorable halloween I have ever had, and that's what I was wearing.

1 comment:

  1. Grade: 8/10
    • High school is two words
    • Freshman shouldn't be capitalized.
    • Halloween is a holiday and should always be capitalized.
    • Misuse of comma after included

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